> > > One sentence in your story confused me, however, because of the wording:
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> > > >The library was dark; the lights left on when the librarian left went out when the ice had pulled down the power lines.
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> You can leave the wording the same and make it more readable by adding two commas.
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> "The library was dark; the lights, left on when the librarian left, went out when the ice had pulled down the power lines."


Beautiful!!

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