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Re: Just a little poem
Posted By: Gahalia, on host 216.3.252.5
Date: Thursday, February 15, 2001, at 18:39:23
In Reply To: Just a little poem posted by Whisper on Thursday, February 15, 2001, at 18:26:50:

> I wrote this poem sort of because of Valentine's Day, and other random depression things. Good? Bad? Comments? Anything you have to say is welcome.


I think it's a beautiful poem. Often when poems rhyme the words seem forced or contrived, but I didn't get that sense here.
Ga"also love the imagery"halia